Punished Jobbers - Detailed Destroyers!
Established: 2022-08-28
- Squash match
- Descriptive writing
- Weapons
- Male / Female
- Torture
A place descriptive Jobbers and their tormentors to meet and craft stories together.
The Asylum, Part One: The Prelude
02:52 Zack_Davis: "Hi Harley, can I see you for a second?" ... *Approaches cautiously* ..."What?! No, that's not a straight jacket behind my back..."
02:52 Zack_Davis: *Pounces!*
02:53 Zack_Davis: You are not logged in.
02:53 Harley_Malone: "What?????!!! OWW!! Off me brute!!"
02:53 Zack_Davis: "Jesus! You bit me!!!"
02:54 Zack_Davis: You are not logged in.
02:54 Zack_Davis: "Get back here Harley!"
02:57 Harley_Malone: Back!! Back!!! I’m running hard… looking for a spot to hide… to duck into… anything to escape.. I know not this psycho in the madhouse chasing me…. Grrrr… he dare touch me!! I turn a corner…. Then wait…. And slide out one leg to see if he runs too fast around and trips…
03:01 Zack_Davis: *panting as I run...us killer psychos are notorious for skipping cardio day*...looking left and right, where IS she, I have such grand plans for this one...never sees that damn leg...
03:02 Zack_Davis: Face Planted on the old stone floors, feet almost touching the ground over my head...skidding
03:02 Zack_Davis: 😳😡😱🤕
03:03 Harley_Malone: "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH"
03:05 Harley_Malone: I’m laughing like a maniac as I see my trap works!! Woot!! As I see your face plant… I jump up and down and hop over to you and JUMP squarely on your back as you come to stop… trying to ride you like a surfboard….. ahhhhhh… ride’s over…. Did I break him already? I then kick the top of your head with my foot as I bounce off…
03:07 Zack_Davis: "Damn it" I scream in frustration. "I almost had her.
03:08 Zack_Davis: "Ooofffffff!!!" as you jump on my back, then kick my head for good measure ... look at all the pretty stars ... Never the mind, she'll never find her way out of my old deserted asylum...
03:10 Zack_Davis: You are not logged in.
03:10 Zack_Davis: You are not logged in.
03:11 Zack_Davis: You are not logged in.
03:11 Harley_Malone: I see your head hitting the floor and that you’re a little stunned… seeing as how I can’t move my arms… I stand above you and then drop to my knees…. In front of your head and try and get them between your thighs…. And hold…
03:11 Harley_Malone: "tell me the way out!! NOW! Or I will bring pain!!"
03:16 Zack_Davis: I giggle a sinister laugh at your threats..."I put valium in your lunch, and it's just a matter of time before your are in Dreamland"...if only I can keep her here until it takes effect..."Harley," I 'try' to explain, "this place is 150 years old, I could never explain to you how to get out. Let me free and I will show you..."
03:22 Harley_Malone: "I don’t believe you!!! You did what?? Valium!!!!!" I start to panic…. Omg… what!!! I squeeze your neck!! "You have to know the way?? You have to!!!" I am panicking now… thinking I’m up against the clock… hyperventilating a bit… and it’s only making me more dizzy… "ok!! Ok!! I don’t have the time to play games!! Get up and show me the way… don’t try anything or I’ll…. I’ll bite your fucking lips off!"
03:26 Zack_Davis: "Hahahahaha! Are you getting sleepy yet Harley? You should be getting nice and relaxed. And we've spoken about your violent tendencies, don't you think biting my lips off might be a step backwards? Come now, Harley, come back to the experimentation room with me..."
03:29 Zack_Davis: "Besides, we are on a deserted island. You would need the boat even if you did get out of here.' You are not logged in.
03:31 Harley_Malone: Everything… seems fuzzy… what? Take me away… like get me out of here!! Violent… you haven’t seen violent yet buddy… wait… I just want to chill for a bit. Like listen to some smooth jazz…. Like…. Dude… have you ever smelled light before? Like real light? Like it’s amazing… daylight smells way better than fluorescent. Take me to the door.. I’ll follow you…
03:34 Zack_Davis: "Yes, Harley, just follow me. You can trust me, you know you can...just allow me to take you to the door,, and I show you to the boathouse...yes, just in here."
03:37 Harley_Malone: "Boathouse!! Yes!! Good boy. Take me to the boat… I’m so tired.. a boat ride sounds nice… like Venice.."
03:41 Zack_Davis: "Good girl..., Yes, Venice...isn't it beautiful Harley? Venice is right through this door...go in and see the beautiful sights of Venice...SHOVE!...SLAM! ...maniacal laughter! "Hahaha! I've got you, my little Harley! Oh, what fun we are going to have..." You are not logged in.
03:44 Harley_Malone: Oh!! Where are the little men with gondolas? The striped shirts and hats?? I don’t see…. Ohhhhhhhhh I am pushed!!! And slide forward and stumble over my bare feet and smash my head into a concrete wall.. owwww. What?? I……. Skimp to the ground asleep……. I only hear mad laughing as a soundtrack to my dreams
03:50 Zack_Davis: I peek in through the window in the door, as you fall into a peaceful, psychotic sleep. I pull out my cell phone and punch in a number..."hello?...yes, I've got her. Tomorrow night? Yes, tomorrow night is fine, make the arrangements"...flip the phone off, and continue to admire you sleep, thoughts of great impending wealth running through my mind. I go to check on my other captives...
03:51 Harley_Malone: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
03:52 Harley_Malone: I start to wake up…. "What?? Where am I?? Hey!! What am I wearing?" I scream in horror… remembering a panicked chase!! No!! No!! How did I end up here!! It’s nothing but bare concrete and a drain… I start to cry in fear…
03:57 Zack_Davis: "Harley, my Princess you're awake!" I unlock your door, checking your restraints cautiously. "You will make a lot of money for me tomorrow night, Miss Harley. I bind your feet with shackles, and say "come, walk with me". Just a few doors down from your cell are the doors to the asylums old gymnasium
03:59 Zack_Davis: "Do you want to see your way off of this island?" I throw the doors open revealing the gym... You are not logged in.
04:08 Harley_Malone: "Hey!!" I scream and back into a corner as I see you open the door and enter… my face frozen in fear… "who are you?? What do you want? What do you mean make you money?" Omg…… I shiver a bit and then see you bend down and put shackles on my ankles… and I am panicking but too afraid to move … then…. I meekly follow you out of the cell.. anywhere but there!! I look back in the hallway and it seems endless… and shuffle along.. I can’t move anything! My arms… my feet! You bastard!! Let me go!! I then see the doors open and the gym….. "what…. What is this???"
04:14 Zack_Davis: "This, Harley, is your chance at freedom. Tomorrow night, several of the richest men in the world will meet here. They will be here to watch the fights I have arranged between the lost souls I have assembled here on this island. They will be here to enjoy the fights and to gamble huge sums of money on their favorite girls. You, Harley, will be the main event. As the host, I will earn 30% of all wagers placed. And if you win, you will earn your release from this imprisonment. But if you lose?" I just shake my head.
04:15 Harley_Malone: "I’ll win… I don’t have any other choice!! You’re a madman!!"
04:16 Zack_Davis: "Yes, my dear, and you are going to make me a very wealthy madman".
04:17 Zack_Davis: "You will learn of your opponent when you meet in the ring."
04:17 Harley_Malone: My luck it’s going to be some gigantic 6’5 Amazon beast…..
04:19 Harley_Malone: But I try and put that out of my mind and focus… this horror has a way out.. a way out… I can do this. I can do this.. I’ve been in fights before! I can get this done. I try and pump myself up… try and make myself confident… I don’t want to think of any alternative other than Victory!
04:21 Zack_Davis: I leave you alone in your cell to contemplate your future... You are not logged in.
04:24 Zack_Davis: (☺️ you're good)
04:26 Harley_Malone: I get escorted back… and then "NOOO! No!! Not in the cell! Not the cell! Please!! I"… OOOF… feel the shove and almost trip in my ankle restraints as I stumble forward.. I turn around and shiver as the door begins to close!! "Wait!! Please!"
04:26 Harley_Malone: (So are you!) ❤️
04:27 Zack_Davis: Maniacal laughter fades into the vastness of the dark hallways.
04:30 Harley_Malone: Crying and shuffling my feet as I slump against the wall… staring down…. I just woke up and now adrenaline and fear rushing through me… and I can’t move which is even worse.. arms restrained… feet chained… stuck in a concrete pillbox of a room and nothing but creepy sounds… the crazy laughing seems to replay in my head over and over… l feel like I’m being driven insane…
To be continued...The Asylum, Part Two: Freedom or Failure
Published: 2022-09-07, viewed 51 times.
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