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Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Listening to the announcer and watching from behind the curtain as you enter...I know how tough you can be and it looks like you have worked hard to look so good for this match.....Once you are in the ring the announcer waits a moment and the starts off again..."And her opponent, all the way from Jamaica....she's young, she's fit and she is dangerous ...known to everyone as SJ....Here she is ...SWEET JAMAAAAIIIICCCCAA....I burst through the curtains, running towards the ring in my black 2 piece with gold trim...Hi 5's as I go, spring onto the apron and turn to face the crowd....striking a pose and smiling my cutest, most innocent smile...before I grip the top rope and vault into the ring....wave to all four sides of the audience and go to my corner.

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I see you coming to the ring ! We already had several fights that didn't end well for me ! They always were close fights but I lost them in the end... i am well decided to make the things change tonight ! I walk to the middle of the ring quietly and wait on you for the staredown ! "Come SJ ! Let the audience take pictures of your face as it is recognizable!!" I smile waiting on you to come to me

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Pushing off my corner post I walk slowly to the centre of the ring and stop inches from your face...legs apart, hands on hips......I wait a few moments for the noise to die down "I can't believe I have to fight you again you racist piece of white trash" I bark loudly then move even closer and try desperately not to headbutt you before we start...I so wanna do just that

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: "Racist ? Not my fault if you are a stinky black slut !!!" Your face comes close to mine ! "Sniff sniff ! Oh you already stinks !! Probably by you it is not black ! It is transparent full with shit !!" I push you with my hands on your shoulders ! "Tonight you will be eliminated from the tournament bitch !"

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: "All I can smell is your bull shit you ugly white whore" I retort and shove you hard as I step back to my corner ready to start the match....a buzz runs around the crowd and I see money exchanging hands as they bet on us "When I've finished with you tonight you won't even remember your name you slut"

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I let you speak ! "Tonight you will die bitch !!" Suddenly I move my hands and up grab your ears ! You are so close to me that I just hold your hair in the same position, moving my skull back and throwing a devastating head butt right on your nose, trying to surprise you before the bell !

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I stagger back as you strike my nose and feel a warm trickle of blood ooze onto my lips...I wipe it with my right hand and look from my hand up into you eyes...."Fuck... you bitch" I growl and twist my upper bodu and smash my blood cover right fist into your face trying to crush your nose as I do

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I see the punch coming ans deflect it to the side with my forearm ! "You will see who will be fucked !" As your guard is open i quickly regroup my guard and throw a left right left hard combo to your chest and finish with a front kick to your abs to make you walk back

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: This match is not starting well for me and your supporters are in fine voice as you draw blood with your first strike, block my reply and then send me reeling backwards....I was so occupied blocking your punches that the kick sent me back towards the ropes....I bounce off them and try to send my left leg high to kick the side of your head

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You bounce from the rope and move forward ! You move your hips and i see your leg coming up fast! I move lower on my knees and let your leg flies over my head ! Your bidy totally off guard ! I take a deep breath and fire a vicious hard hook punch to your open abs and stand up quickly throwing my other fist to your jaw in a brutal uppercut

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: My timing is way off....I need to get focussed here I think to myself as my leg sails over your head and before I can reset you crunch my abs with a hard punch, I can take those fairly well but you are starting to penetrate my defences so easily...then my head snaps back as you strike my jaw and I drop to my knees and roll under the ropes to get a break and re-focus.....

Luisa_the_dark_queen: The two punches are wild and brutal ! I can feel your abs crushed and nearly hear your jaw cracking under my uppercut ! You fall on your knees and before I can take your hair to continue the punishment you roll under the ropes ! "The poor little piece of shit is already tired ???!" I laugh as I walk to the middle of the ring showing off for the crowd ! "Come on SJ !!! Bring me your dirty ass !!!"

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Taking a few deep breaths, I ignore your taunts and walk around the ring a bit, my nose isn't bleeding and I have controlled myself and step onto the apron and, watching you carefully, climb back through the ropes and move into my southpaw stance and knowing I need to find a way back and start hurting you

Sheril: Come on SJ!

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I jump from one foot to the other smiling !!! You climb on the apron ! I let you enter the ring and raise my guard ! I move forward quietly and carefully ! I see your attitude and decide to show my skills !!! I fire a new left right jabs combo tobyour face, trying to make my fists slide between your guard and finish with a hard hook punch to the side of your face trying to hit your temple brutally

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Watching you so carefully....your sneaky headbutt before the match had unsettled me but I feel ready now....you come onto me and start with alternate jabs...I block with my arms and fists, weaving my upper body and my feet are lighter...then comes the big one and I duck under it and see your unprotected belly and slam my right fist in with real venom and as I take a quarter turn left and start to rise....my right is in action coming up at your jaw...the power generated as my hips rise and I feel the bone hit my hand

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You block my fists and duck under my hook ! You attack ! Your first punch hits my abs hard ! I feel my muscles burning like hell !!! You move to the side and your right hits my jaw hard! My head snaps to the side brutally ! I taste blood in my mouth ! I quickly shake my head and move my left hand to your hair, trying to destroy your face with wild right hooks to the middle of it, trying to hit your nose and mouth as hard as i can repeatedly

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I am pleased I managed to strike you but my joy soon goes as you attack again and grab my hair, and , although it restricts my movemnet it leaves me with two hands against your one....as your right hooks come in hard and fast my left hand tries to deflect them or stop them....a few get through and sting...my nose is bleeding again and my cheek seems to be swelling....but my right hand is free and I slam a series of right jabs at your left eye and your nose, getting some good strikes....then I come in real close and slam my right knee into the side of your abs

Luisa_the_dark_queen: My fist hits hard ! On your arms, nose and cheeks !!! You counter violently ! Your fist hitting my left eye hard and make the skin becomes dark around my eye ! My vision unclear for a second and your other punch hits my nose ! It directly starts bleeding ! I feel your knee crushing my floating ribs and I moan stepping to the side ! I release your hair and as I let me fall backside i twist my body to throw my foot as hard as i can to your chest as I fall down ! I try to quickly roll on my shoulders to stand up again

Sheril: Get her SJ

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Despite my early pain, I feel I am getting somewhere at last and as you release my hair and start to step to the side, I take a step back to get some space and luckily, it gives your foot further to travel...it does strike me but no too badly and I manage to catch it and get both hands onto your ankle and twist it violently and use my right foot to send two fast kicks to the inside of your knee and twist it some more

Luisa_the_dark_queen: My flying kick hits you but not hard enough ! You catch my ankle and twist it before throwing two big kick in the inside part of my knee ! I scream in pain ! I press my shoulders and neck against the mat and bend my back to move my hips as high as I can and throw my heel to the top, trying to catch your chin or chest !

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: While I am working on one leg you use the other one...I see it coming and manage to sway my top half back...but not quick enough and your heel strike my tits like a sledge hammer....dropping your twisted leg, I take some steps away from you, rubbing my girls "Fuck....you bitch" I hiss as I breath through the pain and set myself to attack again

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I roll on 4 legs and quickly stand up, your kicks to my knee making it difficult for me to stand up ! "What did you think stinky bitch !!" I smile and clean my nose with the back of my right hand ! I see you at some distance ! I suddenly rush forward trying not to think about my burning knee and jump, moving my hands up to your hair and pulling you forward as I am in the air and throw my knee up to your solar plexus in a flying knee strike, hoping to take you by surprise

Sheril: Ouch

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: When I see your hands going high I mirror them and as you grab my hair my hands tangle into yours ...what I didn't see is your knee come up and it strikes like a missile into my chest....I gasp and release your hair and manage to grab a rope to stop me going down....stumbling backwards and gasping for air as I try to get some space between us but back myself in the corner and feel the post at my back....I try to replace air and to focus and be ready for any follow up

Luisa_the_dark_queen: Damn this bitch doesn't want to fall !!! You move to the corner but I see you are in troubles !!!! I follow you ! Facing you ! You reach the corner and you are trapped in the corner !! I throw a hard hook to your face but it is a total fake punch ! I let me fall quickly on my knees and throw a left and then a right hooks as hard as i can into your floating ribs !

Sheril: Come on SJ do something!

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Strating to duck from the hook but it doesn't come and i take two really painful punches and drop to my knees gasping and really taking some punishment....and your face is right in front of me but before I can attack it you are already on the move

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I stand up quickly ! "How do you feel bitch ?" I let you begin to climb on your feet as I hear Sheril voice "shut up slut your turn will come soon !!" You begin to stand up and i raise my right leg, making my knee nearly touching my chest just before throwing it forward trying to smash your abs the hardest i can to make your gut explode under my monster kick

Sheril: MOOO

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: This time I do see it coming and just drop as low as I can, as fast as I can and manage to grab your calf and push it towards the ropes...I'm breathing hard and really sweating but I see my opportunity....it's there in front of my face ...and in a flash my right fist shoots up from the canvas and drives deep into you exposed pussy....gasps from the crowd....cheers from my fans....

Sheril: GASPS

Sheril: YES kick her ass SJ

Luisa_the_dark_queen: My kick misses!!!! You grab my calf and push my leg over the second rope !!!! I jump on my left leg trying to keep my balance ! Suddenly I feel a huge pain against my pussy as a big hit noise echoes on the whole room !!!! My eyes pop wide open, my mouth opens but no sounds come out as I place my hands on my pussy and fall on my back ! My hands on my crotch i wriggle from side to side crying in pain in silence

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I slowly get to me feet....my body complaining with every move and look down at you "How do you feel bitch" I mock with your words from a few minutes ago.....I grab your hair one handed and wrench you up and shove you against the ropes, hanging your arms over the top rope to keep you in place and using my right foot I spin and kick your ribs as hard as I can and then, with you still hanging there...I run across the ring....bounce of the ropes and come at you like a missile....my hard Jamaican head in the lead....and I fly straight into your exposed ribs

Sheril: *hold my breath hoping she hits this move

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You grab my hair and pull me up to my feet ! My trunks wet right on my pussy ! I breath deeply ! You quickly place my arms over the top rope and turn on yourself to hit my ribcage with a brutal side kick !!!! My chest bounces !!! I hang in the rope in pain ! I see you moving to the opposite ropes and come back to me running as fast as you can ! You jump, moving your head forward like a ram ! It explodes against my sternum !!!!!! I feel the blood taste in my mouth as you fall on 4 legs in front of me I try to throw a kick to your head to throw you back and free myself from the ropes if I can

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I have invited @Fitgirl007 to join #TTM_Luisa_vs_SJ.

Fitgirl007: Come on Luisa... get off those ropes you can do this!!

Sheril: FUCK her up SJ!

Fitgirl007: Back off Sheril!

Sheril: Or?

Sheril: *scoffs

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I've finally managed to hurt you enough to start feeling confident but as I drop to my hands and kness...in pain and exhausted you kick my head and I'm a bit dazed and roll away from you and slowly start to stand up....my vision is a little blurred, my face swollen, blood on my face and pain just about everywhere.....There you stand...I try to muster some energy, digging deep and throw my left leg up at your already damaged ribs in the hope that I can finish you right now

Fitgirl007: You don't want to know Sheril!

Fitgirl007: Take care of her Luisa!!

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I move forward, my ribcage burning like hell !!! I see you standing up too ! You come forward and I twist my whole upper body, throwing my rigbt fist as hard as i can to your temple ! At the moment I move my fist to your face I see your leg coming up and smashing my injured ribcage wildly ! I hear a dark Crack noise as some ribs break under your brutal kick ! My fist flying to your face but no idea if it connects as i fold on my side holding my ribcage

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sheril: CRACK!

Fitgirl007: How would like to feel that Sheril?

Sheril: I know it ain't coming from you

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Focussed on hitting my target with all of the force I can muster...I feel my leg connect and hear a brutal 'crack' ....I don't see you fist coming and it hits me square on the jaw....my knees buckle ...the room spins and I go down hard......it takes a moment but I'm sure I can hear the referee doing the only job he is here for tonight and that is count out the KO.....it seems like he is counting me...1....2.....3.....4.....

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sheril: 😮

Fitgirl007: Count SJ out Ref!! Get up Luisa!!

Fitgirl007: Sheril whenever you are ready I can let you know how that feels!!

Luisa_the_dark_queen: We are both on the mat ! My ribs broken giving me a huge pain ! I see you laying in front of me ! I try to focus ! I try to move on my legs but my ribcage is in a wild pain !!!! 5.....6.....7..... i try to turn on 4 legs but just pressing my hands on the mat makes my ribcage burning ! I spit to the mat a mix of saliva and blood as I try to breath normally

Fitgirl007: You can do it Luisa.. get up let him count her out!!

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: 7 registers and my eyes open but are glazed.....I can see you right there in front of me but it doesn't register with me who is getting counted....then I see the referee who is counting and as he does he is pointing at us both one person with each of his hands....my legs are like jelly.....8.....9......we are both in trouble as he finishes ....10.......

Fitgirl007: Nooooo..

Luisa_the_dark_queen: *DING DING DING* I hear the bell as the refree counts 10 ! I look at him ! Hoping he will says that i won ! "This fight ends with a draw as both of the fighters cannot stand up !" I look at you full of hate, my ribcage burning like hell ! "HEEEEYYYYYY NOOOOO THIS BITCH IS KO !!!!!" I try to catch your hair to punch you again but the refree stops me !!!! "I AM NOT DONE WITH YOU FUCKING BLACK BITCH !!!!" i spit to you !!!! "NO DRAW BITCH !!! LETS FINISH THIS IN THE PARKING IF YOU ARE ABLE TO STAND UP !!!" I try to move to you but the refree stops me and pull me back

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sheril: Get your Jamaican ass up!

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Narrator...Well this is a cliff hanger...obviously we need a winner....but will either of us be able to continue?.....watch this space for the next episode, which will take place really soon, and will probably start an hour after this match ended, if we can make it to the locker rooms....see you all soon for the next enthralling episode....(in reality probably tomorrow lol)

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I will kill you SJ

Fitgirl007: You won that luisa!!

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Fuck you

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: fuck you too

Sheril: Get her SJ!

Fitgirl007: You and sheril can go to the loser's circle

Fitgirl007: I love your false confidence!

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I move out of the ring holding my ribcage ! "I wait on you in the parking fucking black slut !!!" I walk to the stairs and go downstairs always holding my ribcage as I feel frustrated of this draw !!! I know I koed you ! I feel the rage making my blood like boiling

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Leaving the ring...my head pounding with pain, I go to the locker room and swill cold water on my face and take a few sips then then follow the stairs and passage to the underground car park....insure whether you will be there .....as soon as I bursy through the door I see you....your face like thunder but also bruised and bloodied, just like mine.....I walk straight for you and attempt a kick to your belly as I close in

Luisa_the_dark_queen: "Welcome to hell stinky bitch !!" You open the door and come quickly to me ! You attempt a kick to my belly and I block it and push you back ! "Someone call the ambulance this bitch will not be able to go back home tonight !" I raise my fists ready to continue

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: When you push me back I stumble onto the bonnet of a silver car and set off the alarm...it doesn't take long for the crowd to start appearing from upstairs to see what's happening...."Better call the funeral home for this sorry piece of white trash as well" I reply mockingly....and close up again and try a straight right at your face and a left hook aimed at you ribs

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I duck under your punches and fire a left right left hooks punch to your floating ribs as i try to make you walk back to the column of the parking !!!! I breath loudly with pain as I am surprised you are this quick right after a ko !

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: taking the hooks on my arms as I keep my guard low, but the strikes still hurt and I'm really breathing hard and my focus is a little off...I try a low kick at your left thigh with my right foot

Luisa_the_dark_queen: Your kick hits the outside of my thigh ! Letting a big purple mark ! I groan loudly as I try to catch your hair and pull your head in an headlock! I try to drive you to a car behind me and give you a DDT to make your head hits the hood

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Landing the kick but slow to build on it you drive me back and my ass slams into the side of a blue car with enough force to set off another alarm and then my head slam into the hood and my head spins and as I try to ease away I see the huge dent.....my only option right then is to start punchimg your sides from close range to try and cause pain

Luisa_the_dark_queen: Your fists dive into my sides ! Causing my ribcage to burn badly ! I stand up and move back to the middle of the parking ! "Come on bitch !!!' I make you sign to come ! Each time I breath my ribcage is burning ! I feel the blood on my nose and lips

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Standing upright, I shake my head and try to focus....stepping your way and then I rush you...bend forwards and drive my shoulder into your mid-section and the momentum takes you back until your back slams against a red car

Luisa_the_dark_queen: OOOOOOFFFFFFFF your shoulder hits my abs brutally and my body flies back !!! I land in a dark metal noise on a car hood !!! I scream loudly in pain as my ribcage is compressed ! Blood flows out of my mouth as I try to wrap my legs around your waist and your head under my armpit

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I'm not sure which bit of me hurts the most but I'm determined to break you and I grunt loudly as I slightly bend my knees and, with my arms around you.....lift you and slam your back down onto the hood again.....the low bonnet of the sports car taking a hit and I'm just hoping you took one too

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You lift me up !!!! "What the fuck no !!!" I scream in panic as you slam me down one more time on the hood ! Some ribs breaking more !!!! I spit some blood and lay spreadeagled on the car hood holding my ribcage in pain

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Going for your hair I pull you off the low hood and as I do, it pops open almost like magic...but probably caused by the damage....I slam a left fist into your face and a straight right into your ribs....knocking you backwards into the open space the hood has left by opening up

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You pull me to the side by my hair and I hear the hood opening !!! Your fist hits my face ! Then my ribcage ! I fall under the hood in a strange position! I have so much difficulties to breath ! I try to kick you away but I am in a bad position !

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Your breathing is really loud and I can see you are in agony around your rib cage......Taking the hood in both hands, I slam it down onto your body, noticing that your left arm takes a hefty strike as well where it sticks out of the car

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: *CLANG* the hood nearly closes with my body trapped in it ! My left arm takes a violent impact as the hood crushes it wildly !!!! I scream loud in pain !!! My legs kicking the air in total pain as I scream without end under the hood !!!!! My left arm black where the hood hitted

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Releasing the lid so it goes back up, I grab your left arm and pull you roughly from the can and drop you onto your knees in front of me...taking half a step back and kicking your ribs....my bare skin slapping against yours "You want me to call that ambulance now bitch?" I hiss

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You pull me forward and I am forced to knee !!! My arms are hanging from my shoulders ! "N... never... i... i will k... kill you !!" Each words causes blood to flow from my mouth ! I hear someone calling the ambulance ! I try to stand up breathing loudly

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Seeing you in real trouble spurs me on...my adrenaline giving me strength and energy....as you start to stand, I turn my body so my left side is lower than my right....my left arm goes between your legs and my right arm around your neck...a big effort and I hoist you onto my shoulders and take a couple of deep breaths....then I raise you as high as my tired body can manage and slam you face down, ribs first onto the roof of the car

Luisa_the_dark_queen: you lift me up ! My body is nearly lifeless !!! You place me over your shoulder ! My ribcage burns !!! You throw me forward and my upper body slams hard over the roof of the car ! My legs fall and my feet touch the floor as I lay with my chest and face over the hood breathing loudly !

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I take a moment and breath deeply and climb up the front of the car and onto the roof....use both hands you pull you to your feet and slam you head between my thighs my back facing the hood....my heels touching the rubber surround at the top of the windshield

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You climb on the roof and force me to stand up ! I have huge difficulties to keep my balance amd you place my head between your thighs !!!! My body bends forward ! I feel your thighs around my head ! I know what will happen and my arms wave ! "N... no... n... nooo!!"

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Digging deep searching for every ounce of strength and energy to finish you off as I take my arms around your battered body and squeeze those ribs as I lift you up and point your feet to the roof....steady myself and then jump up and back and drive your head into the windshield with a vicious piledriver....the sound of cracking glass combines with dented metal as I land on the hood

Luisa_the_dark_queen: You lift my body upside down !!!! Our bodies fly and dive to the hood !!!! My head deforms the hood completely and everything becomes black !! My legs fall on the windshield and I lay down compeltely out cold, my body convulsing

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I take a moment and then slip off the car and look at you out cold.....the referee appears and raises my hand.....then I pull you into a pose and offer a photo opportunity to the crowd as I pose just a step away arms raised in triumph

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

TheBlackHulk: Ouch!

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I lay on the hood totally out cold ! I slowly open my eyes, my ribcage burning like hell !!!! I hear the crowd cheering wildly for you !!! I cannot move !!! My body in a wild pain from everywhere

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Moving in closer as the crowd start taking pictures I can see you are moving a bit "I'm the last one standing bitch" I hiss in your face "And now you gonna say that line again....'Black is better'....say ir bitch" I growl as my fist hovers over your broken ribs

Luisa_the_dark_queen: I lay on the hood breathing with a lot of difficulties!!! "H... how... d... did you recover... this quick..." your fist dives into my ribs brutally as blood jumps out of my mouth !!! "N.... no !"

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I can hear the siren for the paramedics in the distance...."Say it bitch, or do you want more pain?" I threaten

Luisa_the_dark_queen: "N... no bitch !!!" I breath deeply my ribcage burning like never ! I try to stand up my elbows on the hood

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: Springing onto the bonnet and straddling your chest "You want more pain huh?....now say the words you useless white slut"

Luisa_the_dark_queen: "No please... no !!!!!!!!!!!!" I see you over me as i am unable to move ! My arms open as I can just see your crotch over me

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: I slam my ass onto your chest.."you are one stupid piece of white shit....SAY IT"

Luisa_the_dark_queen: Your ass smashes my ribcage ! Some more ribs crack !!! I scream in pain "STOOOOOOOOOOP AAAAAAAAH BLACK IS BETTER BLACK IS BETTER !!!" My arms waving and my legs kicking air under you

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: "See how easy was that?".....I mock and get ready to go...."Let me know when you wanna try agian LOSER" I growl and give you the middle finger as the paramedics arrive

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

Luisa_the_dark_queen: The ambulance comes to the parking and the medics put me on a stretcher ! I am badly hurt with probably several ribs broken and my left arm too.... i hear the crowd cheering for you wildly

Luisa_the_dark_queen:

TheBlackHulk: 🫨

Sweet_Jamaicas_back: THE END