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06:43 Remy_Cooper:
06:43 Patrick_Girard: The Factory Presents: Remy Meets Patrick Girard
06:44 Remy_Cooper: The first floor of the Factory Building is open to the public and provides one of our largest revenue streams that funds our private training facilities. We have a full state of the art lifter’s gym, multiple large mats, an Octagon and a boxing ring where we have classes in wrestling, Brazilian jiu jitsu, boxing and mixed martial arts. We also provide a variety of choices in yoga, including Hatha, Vinyasa, and Ashtanga. I often wander down stairs to watch my old friend Andre Jordan take over for the staff instructors and teach jiu jitsu seminars. Today he is working with a group of newly minted purple belts, advanced practitioners to be sure, but still a long way to go to being black belts.
06:45 Remy_Cooper: Being a 2nd dan black belt, Dre knows he would never have made that journey without the help of many mentors, so he loves teaching BJJ to folks still pursuing their journey as a way of giving back. He says it keeps him grounded. It’s a side of him I love to see because I know my brother is in his own kind of heaven, teaching what he loves to people who love to learn from him. His class was just about to start when this big, thick, beautiful blonde, blue eyed white boy walks in and asks if he can roll with the class. He comes in off the street already wearing black square cut fight shorts, tourniquet tight around his big fucking legs and barely able to pack in his big, muscled ass. His white t-shirt stretches almost to the breaking point around his shoulders, pecs and biceps. An amazing specimen, he strides in supremely confident and you can tell by his gait he is a trained fighter. Problem is his confidence spills over into arrogant cockiness, making him just the kinda white boy that instantly makes my dick rock fucking hard. I think to myself, “How do I know this guy….”
06:45 Patrick_Girard: I recognize champion sex fighter Andre Jordan immediately from watching his video and live stream sex fighting matches. I know he is a Renzo Gracie black belt and I have seen him in action at BJJ tournaments, so I am surprised to see him teaching a basic jiu jitsu seminar. He is one of the reasons I am here today. I am a bodybuilder and mixed martial artist from Montreal, Quebec, Canada and I normally train under Firas Zahabi, Conrad Pla and Georges St-Pierre at The Tristar Gym mixed martial arts training center in Montreal. I want to make the jump into sex fighting, but the scene is very undeveloped in Canada, so I am coming straight to the source. I think about going straight up to challenge him, but instead I just ask if I can attend his seminar. Though my physique definitely gets his admiration, he doesn’t seem to recognize me, so I decide to get his attention by tapping out the biggest guy in the class. I sit down on the mat with the rest and listen to him as he begins to instruct us. Every fiber of my being wants to challenge him in every way; jiu jitsu, mma, arm wrestling, but very quickly I start to fall under his charismatic spell as he commands the respect and attention of the large group of assembled grapplers.
06:46 Remy_Cooper: As usual Dre has the class laughing and excited to learn, but also listening intently to his animating ethos about how and why we train jiu jitsu. “Before we step out onto the mat to randori, we bow to remind ourselves to be clear and present for our lesson. We bow to show respect for the art you're learning and the power it's capable of, and we bow as a sign of respect and humility. Remember, our rivals are not our enemies, they are our teachers, our brothers and sisters. To make an enemy is to miss an opportunity to learn.” He stands and bows to his students, then begins his lesson on Kate-Gatame variations on attack and defense.
06:46 Remy_Cooper: After he demonstrates a combination he has the class pair off to drill the technique. I watch this specimen, racking my brain to remember how I know him, as he drills the techniques and it’s obvious he already knows and has integrated a full Kate-Gatame game. He looks like he is enjoying just reviewing his technique, but once Dre opens the class up to open rolling, this guy starts picking the bigger guys in the class and going after taps a bit too aggressively for training. Finally, I watch him crank a choke way too hard and I see Dre flash me a look and I give him a nod that says I will corral this guy. “This is gonna be something,” I think to myself as I kick off my trainers and pull off my Team Factory t-shirt. I bow as I stand aside the mat wearing only my Factory gym shorts and walk over and tap you on the shoulder. “Hey brother, my name is Remy, you want to roll with me?”
06:46 Patrick_Girard: I stand up from the guy I just tapped out and come face to face with Remy Cooper, looking thick and strong. My cock grows hard in my fight shorts and I don’t care to hide it as I take in his tree trunk legs, thick, broad back and huge shoulders and arms. Dude is as tall as me, but a few pounds heavier with deep packed muscle. I recognize him as well from his video and live streaming champion sex fights and I know that he, like Andre, is also a Gracie black belt. I am feeling strong and cocky today and want to make a good impression, so I pretend not to know you. I pull off my too tight t-shirt to show off my huge upper physique, shimmering with sweat and say, “I’m Patrick. Sure, brother, let’s roll.”
06:47 Remy_Cooper: I smile at you and as you step into your grappler stance, seeing you show off your sexy ass body, but I dunk on you by turning my attention towards the guy you just roughly choked out. He was still taking in air and nursing his shoulder as well. “You ok buddy?” I help him up and see that he is stable on his feet, so I point him in the direction of our aid station. “Why don’t you let our nurse take a look at that shoulder, bet it could use some ice. Andre will be over to check on you in a while.” I see Dre looking at me and I nod. He gets the message, so I turn back to you, my gym shorts at full bulge, and with a friendly smile get into my own grappler stance. “You ready to roll, tough guy?” I ask as I reach out my hand to slap and bump.
06:47 Patrick_Girard: “I’m ready to tap you out, Remy Cooper,” I say, loving the surprised look in your eyes as I slap and bump you back, then seeing the wheels turning in your head trying to figure out who I am, I slide in for a single leg takedown, dumping you on your ass and making sure I slide down the side of your body to avoid your leg guard and gain a solid side mount. My big, sweaty chest slides across your hard pecs heavy on you to steal your space. My knees slot into your armpit and your hip to maintain side control and then I grind my right knee across your lower abs looking to gain full mount. I know I am being very aggressive, but my alpha nature has me by the balls and my hard cock demands I tap you out.
06:47 Remy_Cooper: I feel your big muscle weight pressuring down on me in a tough side mount, thinking to myself this fucker thinks he can just go to war with me in my own house. My sense of pique mixes with intense arousal at his pungent man stink and his intense aggressiveness, but I stay calm knowing I got your white ass handled. As you try to gain full mount on me by sliding your knees across my lower abs to land your leg on my other side, I turn into you, grab your knee and shove it hard up into the air, sending you tumbling off me completely like a rag doll. I stand up and look down on you with a smirk. “Now I know who you are; you’re Patrick Girard. You train under Georges St-Pierre at Tristar in Montreal. Why you coming at me so hard?”
06:47 Remy_Cooper:
06:47 Patrick_Girard: I stand up and square off with you a foot apart, both our chests rising and falling with lungfuls of breath and our shorts bulging huge. “I want to train to become a sex fighter at Team Factory,” I say looking you boldly in the eyes.
06:48 Remy_Cooper: I step into you chest to chest, shoving my bulge straight into yours. “And you think showing our jiu jitsu students bad mat etiquette and then come at me like we at war out of nowhere is the way to show me you can be a good teammate?” I growl with both anger and arousal.
06:48 Patrick_Girard: “I know I can tap your punk ass out; that should be enough to show you I can be a great fighter for the Factory,” I say, bumping you back with my big chest and trying to keep my dick from exploding out the top of my shorts.
06:48 Remy_Cooper: “Yeah? You think you can tap me out, white boy?”
06:48 Patrick_Girard: “Hell yeah I can.”
06:48 Remy_Cooper: I grin at you. “Okay then. You up for a full on MMA fight for stakes? You fuck me you get on the team, but if I fuck you you’re back on the streets. You game?”
06:49 Patrick_Girard: “Let’s do this.” I snarl and try to bump you back with my chest again, but you don’t move an inch. Instead I feel our cock bulges just smashing together and know that you are just as hungry to fuck me as I am to fuck you.
06:49 Remy_Cooper: As soon as you agree to my terms I grab your head with both hands and force a wide mouthed kiss on you, penetrating your mouth with my tongue, pinning yours against the side of your mouth. Then just as fast I throw one more cock fucking hump into you and shove your head backwards, saying “Follow me.” I walk to the elevator to the private floors and punch in my code. We get on and take it to the third floor where we do all our grappling and fight training. We have a large central mat where we all meet every morning to do calisthenics as a team, and we have many private grappling suites, a boxing ring and an octagon. I turn and look at you staring at our state of the art facilities and say “Oi, Meathead, Padded mat room or octagon?”
06:49 Patrick_Girard: “Octagon,” I say, trying to wipe the impressed look off my face as I check out the facilities and instead look at you aggressively. “Fight shorts or naked?”
06:49 Remy_Cooper: “Yeah? Octagon it is and I choose naked. Follow me.” I walk as you follow across the central mat to the opposite hallway, take a right and walk all the way to the end where we have our regulation sized Octagon set up. The boxing Ring is on the other side of the building. I stand at the steps to the gate and slide my Factory shorts and jock off my big ass and down my legs, kicking them to the side while picking up two sets of 5 lbs mma gloves and throw one pair at you. “Put’em on,” I command as I walk up the steps, open the gate, take a moment and bow to the combat space, then walk onto the canvas of the octagon.
06:49 Patrick_Girard: The more you issue commands, the more pissed I get; the more pissed I get the harder I plan to knock you out and fuck you back to consciousness. I slide out of my fight shorts and pull on the 5 lb gloves, wrap the wrist with the strap and stomp up the stairs behind you onto the canvas, thinking “Fuck bowing.” You have turned around and are facing me as I walk straight up to you and get right in your face, feeling both our huge hard cocks poking at each other’ abs. Our hot breath hits each other’s faces as we go chin to chin and stare each other down. “I fuck you and I am on the Team.”
06:49 Remy_Cooper: I take one last step into you pressing my forehead into yours, going eye to eye. I push my hips forward and just grind my champion sex fighter cock into yours and see you loving it in your eyes. “And after I fuck you, you’re back on the streets. I just hope I don’t have to mess up that pretty face of yours too badly.” I push you backwards with both my hands on your big, hard chest and raise my fist guard smirking at you. I see that flash of anger in your eyes and smile as you raise your fist guard and we start to circle each other on the pads of our feet.
06:50 Patrick_Girard: I wade straight into you throwing a left cross towards your chin to brush you back, and as you shuffle left to avoid it, I send a tough right leg kick tagging your left calf. I know that shit hurt watching you juke backwards, so I am eager to press the attack by wheeling around after the kick and stepping forward to throw a right cross straight from my shoulder towards your chin.
06:50 Remy_Cooper: I never attack first; preferring to wait for my opponent to show his opening moves. I shuffle my feet left to dodge your wild cross, knowing you're playing games, still you tag me outright with a stinging kick to my left calf. Feeling the pain seize my calf up, I move away to shake it out only to see you wheel about and send a big Canadian set of knuckles straight to my chin. I yank back to dodge again, but you catch the corner of my chin and my neck screams at me as my head snaps right. I move way the fuck back and move around the big octagon just for a moment to recover, then raise my fist guard and move back in towards you.
06:50 Patrick_Girard: As you move back towards me I close the rest of the space double time and throw a right hook towards the side of your head and a left uppercut to your kidneys. My cock swinging heavy between my legs as sweat starts to run down from my pits, feeling supremely confident feeling both punches land tough.
06:50 Remy_Cooper: I take the hook to the side of my hard head, feeling dazed a bit, but flex my core to absorb the left upper cut while simultaneously pounding my own right cross hard to your chin. As your head snaps back I charge you, shoving you into the fence of the octagon. When you bounce back off the fence I drill you with a right knee to your solar plexus, slamming you back against the fence, jolting your diaphragm and knocking some wind out of you. You double up just enough that I turn my hips and slam into you sideways, planting my feet firmly on the canvas to keep the pressure up so I can wrap an arm around your head and, yanking it down, start throwing wicked upper cuts into those same solar plexus.
06:50 Patrick_Girard: My confidence turns into survival mode as you connect with that right cross and jam me up in the fence slamming tough uppercuts into my solar plexus. I am sucking air as I look down and start stamping on your feet to fuck with your stance. As you move your feet to avoid my stomps I send a single left uppercut landing under your chin, snapping your head back, then push off the fence and tackle you hard to the canvas. Your legs snap up around me in full guard, locking at the ankles behind my lower back, showing off your well honed jiu jitsu muscle memory, but I am still surge towards you and connect a right and left punch to your head before you can guard up. My cock is pressuring your upturned, hard muscled ass as we fight.
06:50 Remy_Cooper: Still reeling a bit from the solid uppercut, I feel both punches land on my face and head as you surge into my big leg guard. I can taste blood in my mouth and finally get pissed. With the power of my huge quads I yank your upper body forward down onto me, and as your sexy chest slams into mine I wrap my left arm around your head so I can slam my right fist into the side of your head with multiple, quick short jabs. Hearing your grunts, I jab my right arm under your head and across my chest, then use its elbow to shove your head back sideways into my right armpit. As that arm wraps around your head my left hand grips its wrist and locks in a tight guillotine choke threatening your windpipe. I re-cinch my leg guard to hold you into me tighter as my cock hardens again and humps into your abs. We are both sweat soaked and smelling our mingled masculine musks fueling the full arousal of all our senses. “Tap out.”
06:51 Patrick_Girard: I am encased in your wicked jiu jitsu, our sweaty bodies smashed together, feeling my already short supply of air from all the shots to my solar plexus being drained still more by your guilly choke. And yet my cock hardens as it lays thickly in the crack of your sexy black ass. I scoot my knees up tight around your hips, dig my arms under your wide back and pop to my feet, using my own powerful quads to lift you off the mat and slam you back down hard as I can. Between the force of the impact and our slippery sweat it cracks your Guillotine grip apart and I rise up and start rowing fists bombs into your faces again, seeing blood in your teeth making my dick throb harder against your ass.
06:51 Remy_Cooper: Taking more incoming I can feel my face start to swell and most likely my eyes start to blacken, but I yank you back hard off me with my tight leg guard around your torso and as your head rises I throw a right cross straight from my shoulder clocking you squarely in the jaw, sending you sideways as my legs work simultaneously to wrench you in the same direction. I roll towards you looking for a full mount but you get to your knees between my legs, stabbing a leg out to the side to stop me from rolling on top of you.
06:51 Patrick_Girard: I now hover above you only loosely caught up in your legs and I slam down my own right cross into the side of your head, enabling me to scramble fully out of your legs and get up standing on mine. I stalk you looking to superman a punch down on you, but you swivel right and left on your back with expert ease, moving your feet in circles before me in defense until you can scramble back to your own feet. We both have taken some damage so we raise our fists and engage each other more carefully now. I feign a left cross and as you raise your guard to defend, I tag you with a right uppercut, snapping your head back. Then as you take a step backwards I surge at you with my arms around your waist, taking my turn forcing you into the fence behind you, pressuring you with my shoulder while working to jab a foot behind your ankles to trip you to the mat for some ground and pound.
06:51 Remy_Cooper: As you work to clock me with that wicked uppercut again I lose my footing just enough for you to take me into the fence behind me, but failing to get me to the ground, I bring a knee up under your chin hard, staggering you up and backwards. I step into you and clock you with a hard right cross straight to your chin. The punch has you wheeling around, falling to your hands and knees and I am immediately on your back with my arms around your head and neck applying a rear naked choke, already working your windpipe. I can feel you struggle under me, reaching up to try to yank at my choking arms, so I shove my hips into your powerful hindquarters, forcing you flat to the mat where I can dig my feet in and around your thighs, getting my hooks in to control your legs and immobilize you hips. My cock is suddenly hard and sliding up and down your sweaty, muscled ass crack.
06:51 Patrick_Girard: I can feel your thick, hard muscle weight on top of me, your legs controlling my hips and your arms ensnaring my head and neck in an RNC. I am furious that you have me locked up so soon into our match. With precision intention you have been working my breath and air supply with every fist, every knee and now with this choke hold. Your cock now roams freely in my ass crack as you roll to your back with me on top of you, stretching me out. I claw at your arms in vain trying to loosen their grip, but I can feel my air supply drop precipitously and I slip into semi-consciousness so quickly I don’t have time to tap out.
06:52 Remy_Cooper: I feel your big, sweaty muscles go limp on top of me, so I roll you back onto your belly and loosen the choke just enough for you to get vital air, but not enough to really recover. I lift my hips to run my cock up your crack until it finds your tight hole and I slowly plunge it all the way inside you, leaving it there pulsating. I do not disrespect you by seeding you. I know you are just that guy who excelled in a small pond and got a big head, but I have no intention of disregarding your talent or defining you only by your headspace today. I can feel your muscled glutes squeezing on my thick cock trying to expel it, but it remains plunged against your prostate as my chest flexes in your thick, wide back. You are now fully under my physical and sexual control as I start to loosen the choke more so you can get enough air to regain consciousness. I whisper in your ear, “You still want to be on Team Factory?”
06:52 Patrick_Girard: As I repossess a level of consciousness I hear your whispered question in my ear while having me fully trussed up in your big body. A mix of emotions swirl inside me; I feel vulnerable as you have me fully dominated, but somehow I also feel safe in your jiu jitsu embrace. And I also feel intensely aroused as my cook throbs hard into the canvas beneath me. Part of me wants to tell you to go fuck yourself, but a bigger part of me whats to train at the Factory even more now. I struggle in your embrace as I struggle with the question until I finally just let my whole body relax. “Yeah, I want to train with you guys.”
06:52 Remy_Cooper: I feel your body fully submit to me without formally tapping out, but we need a new contract between us to control your rampaging ego. First I release the rear naked choke and just dig my arms around you like I am hugging you from behind. I want you to have all your air back and to be under no greater threat than to have my wide cock head poised at your prostate. Then I say in calming tones, “Submit to me, agree to be my best boy, let me train you, and I will give you provisional Team Factory status.”
06:52 Patrick_Girard: Your heavy muscle weight bares down on me sweaty and radiating heat, and even though you have fully released the RNC, I remain fully subdued by you physically, sexually and emotionally. I know I fought you tough; you were just better and out classed me. “Be your best boy?”
06:52 Remy_Cooper: I raise my hips and slide my dick out of you and just lay back down on top of you, holding you tightly from behind on the canvas in the center of the octagon. “My best boy, my primary student. The only thing keeping you from being a great mma fighter and an even better sex fighter is your ego. Give me your ego, submit to my authority and I will give you my loyalty, my brotherhood and my commitment to train you. I can get you where you wanna go, Patrick, but you have to choose to walk the path of a brother warrior.” I feel you relax even further into me, fully submitting to me by choice, not by force, so I slide off your back and sit on my haunches next to you.
06:53 Patrick_Girard: He could have choked me out and left me there in a sweaty unconscious slump. He could have fucked my ass as brutally as he wanted and I would have been able to do nothing top stop him. Instead, he is now sitting next to me offering me brotherhood and a chance to train with him and Team Factory. George St. Pierre has tapped me out fast as hell and made me submit in any number of jiu jitsu submissions, but no one has ever made me want to submit to them as fully as Remy as he simply sits beside me. I slowly get to my haunches next to him and sheepishly look him in the eyes, still expecting judgment, but find only serenity and a smile looking back at me. Shame starts to rise in me as I reflect on how I have behaved today and I have to look away, but Remy says softly as if he can feel what I am feeling, “Move not backwards into regret; instead move forward into wisdom, Patrick.” Upon hearing these words my shame drains from me and my heart lightens. I look at Remy and say, “I submit to you. Let me be your best boy and train with you.”
06:53 Remy_Cooper: I look you in the eyes solemnly at first and say, “I submit to you too, my new brother,” and then let a big smile spread across my face. I see a smile spread across your face as if mine was infectious and I stand up offering you a hand up. As you stand next to me I wrap my big arm around your big shoulders and say as if we have known each other forever, “Brother, you are sexy as hell and fighting with you has my balls about to burst. You wanna go take a shower and jerk our loads together?”
06:53 Patrick_Girard: I experience a surprisingly pleasant sense of whiplash at the change in your tone towards me and I wrap my own big arm back around your wide shoulders. “Oh hell yeah. I am ridiculously horny for someone who just got their ass kicked,” I reply, sharing my first laugh with you. Then I stop and say, “Can I spend the night with you?”
06:53 Remy_Cooper: “I thought you’d never asked,” I reply.
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Published: 2022-08-12, viewed 115 times.
Thomas Wright
2022-08-14 00:45Hey Remy. Welcome Patrick! Great story, great action, very well written with a wonderful message. Well done!
Christiano Braga
2022-08-13 09:04Classic jiu jitsu story! Nate is aright, we all know that guy lol - Kudos to Remy for finding Patrick! Welcome! we needed a hot blonde boy who can fight and grapple to fill our our ranks :-)
Nate Rogers
2022-08-13 07:02Excellent scene guys. Welcome Patrick! Just the other day some red headed guy can into Gracie academy and was torqin' on everyone's shoulders, cranking hold sway too hard, relying on strength when leverage would do. In the end we had to literally chase him off. I like this story of redemption and brotherhood. Excellent description of MMA fight detail, and great book end using Dre teaching mat ethos at the top and ending with Remy showing the young pup his place but immediately embracing him as a brother and NOT taking stakes. Probably too smart for the room lol
Apollo Dante
2022-08-13 00:45Remy and Patrick are both members of the HOTSHOTS fed but are also signed up several other feds too including The Factory. I have seen some HOT action there and this was yet another great bout between 2 total alphas.
Remy got a huge win over Patrick that had implications for both of them it seemed. So pleased you agreed to share it with the HOTSHOTS studs too!
Remy Cooper
2022-08-13 01:14(In reply to this)
It's not a story about a huge win, it's about how we can defeat ourselves. It's about the struggles to grow as a fighter emotionally and how to be a good team member. And it's about how none of us get anywhere in life without quality mentors. Why do you think you missed these themes? And is there room at your Fed for stories that are not simplistic winner/loser scenarios?