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N.E.W. Match: The Egyptian Goddess's Revelation (PART 2)

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[CONTINUES FROM PART 1: https://venus.chatfighters.com/story/89522]
 
Sara_León: -THHUUNGGGGGGG- A disturbing sound echoes in my ears as the lights in the NEW stadium go out like a candle. The shock makes me recoil, moving slightly away from your back and ending up sitting, leaning backward and resting on my forearm, feeling my heart begin to race, the suggestion intensifying in my chest as that unsettling oriental music begins to play, echoing everywhere, and the panels begin to project faint images. In barely two seconds, I am unable to process what is happening, and you have me completely immersed in your trap, while I gasp loudly, feeling like cornered prey, a victim with no escape, overwhelmed and confused

Sara_León:

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: An eerie music starts playing which has an oriental vibe that entrances you making you halt your potentially match ending attack on my neck .. as you sit back .. my lips appear on the screen plated with gold "You can't hide from me Sara" then flashes start playing from your past .. first the message starts with the persona you project to the NEW fans .. some of your triumph moments and you beating the odds to become NEW champion.. you hugging Hanna after reconciling with her .. My lips appear again on the screen "Hiding behind that façade is a lonely insecure fragile little girl" then images appear of your hand trembling while holding the belt .. a little clip of you crying alone in the dressing room after you just won the belt .. all alone without anyone celebrating with you "you resort to violence when you are most vulnerable" then an image of you smiling while destroying Mina who saw right through you .. then my lips appears again for the last time "but deep down you know the truth .. that you will never be worthy!"

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: Your lips appear on the screen... No, on every screen. I begin turning my head as I hear that I can't hide from you, and your message is projected across every screen surrounding the ring, creating a suffocating effect. My panting grows more aggressive as I run a hand through my hair, gripping it tightly while I try to process what's happening. Then I begin seeing images from my past. First my successes, the image I want to project, but then you drive a knife into my heart, exposing my most vulnerable side through new images. I begin wishing I could make myself as small as possible, hide from you and from the crowd, but no matter where I turn my head, your message fills every corner of my field of vision. Then you mention my violent side, showing the match where I received the loudest boos from the NEW crowd, my unhinged, cruel smile. I feel naked. Two tears stream from my eyes from sheer mental overload as I feel pressure in my chest and struggle to breathe, anxiety taking hold of me just as you deliver your verdict on me, suffocating me and leaving me trembling and gasping in the middle of the ring, completely paralyzed, terrified, and overwhelmed

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I watch you go through the an entire spectrum of emotions watching that message.. by the end of if you are just frozen and trembling in the middle of the ring .. I think that message had an impact on you that is harder and cuts deeper than any of my moves .. then suddenly the lights turn on and I am sitting in front of you .. my eyes wide open and staring to you without flinching as if I was gaining control over your mind .. if you are stunned enough, I will try to wrap my legs around your torso .. then catch your neck pushing it down and choking your between my biceps and forearm .. trying to lock in a sitting guillotine choke/ bodyscissors combo.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: As soon as the lights come back on, your unsettling figure appears in front of me and our eyes meet. Yours, dark, piercing, and manipulative. Mine, filled with tears, now visible to both the crowd and you. The shock makes me gasp, making me feel my heart in my throat, not knowing whether to hate you or surrender my soul to you, when suddenly your legs coil around my waist like cobras, while at the same time your arms trap my neck, forcing my head to immediately dip downward, my temple pressed against the side of your chest and my throat beginning to be crushed by your forearm. I immediately snap back to reality. The lack of oxygen and pumping blood hits me at once, but my entire body is trapped by you. The crowd shouts chaotically, still confused by what they have just witnessed, while my body, curled up on my knees, writhes like that of a trapped prey, feeling the weight of your presence on my mind and on my body, making me inevitably moan. "Ple... ase..."

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: You look like you have seen a ghost or demon once the light are back and I startle you with my gaze .. I immediately wrap you up in the guillotine choke /bodyscissors combo .. when you say please , I smile and I say coldly "you will get from me the same amount of mercy you showed Mina" .. then I squeeze my legs harder around your ribs feeling them impress against my skin .. while I wrench your neck harder and use my other hand to secure the choke on your neck.

Sara_León: Your words make my blood run cold. I feel your flexible legs tightening around my ribs and your toned arms wrenching my neck, as if you were the very goddess of justice, incarnated to punish me. Tears continue to fall silently down my face as I open my mouth in search of air, but your arms do an excellent job of crushing my throat. I begin to turn red while my free hand struggles to relieve the choking. My vision starts to blur, but then I resort to my legs. Still on my knees, I try to shift my weight to one side to create a little space, planting one boot on the canvas and beginning to rise, taking you up with me

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: you are writhing in my hold unable to break it.. I try to break you more morally and spiritually "you will never be enough , Sara" .. but despite all that you still fight back with a heart of a champion and the stubbornness of a wounded beast .. you shift your position a little then plant you boot and begin to rise carrying me up with you despite your back taking a lot of punishment during the match .. I grit my teeth and release a primal scream that echoes through the arena applying all I got in wrenching your neck and crushing your windpipe .. trying to drain you before you fully stand up on your feet

Sara_León: "I... know..." I confess with all the sincerity of my soul, completely surrendered to you... but not to the challenge of the fight. Your scream sends chills down my spine, and your final wrench on my windpipe almost makes me lose consciousness, but I'm already almost on my feet, my legs trembling, and gravity itself does the rest. My legs collapse and I begin to fall backward, taking you with me. If you don't let go, your head will absorb the entire impact

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am shocked at your confession as you finally give up your façade but not the fight .. when I wrench your neck I felt that I almost got you and you lose control of your body .. but it was too late because you were already on your feet carrying me up high in the air .. instead of falling forwards which would be easier for me to absorb the impact on my back, you fall backwards either by instinct or pure luck .. it doesn't matter as I didn't react fast enough and I keep the hold on your neck till the last second where my head impacts on the floor .. I have taken too many impacts on my head this match, this time it doesn't knock me out but it forces me to release choke and roll to my side next to you holding my head dizzy

Sara_León: As soon as you let me go, my head falls back as if it were limp. My chest expands as I take my first gulp of air, only to begin coughing. It's the third time you've choked me in this match. My throat is irritated and I feel incredibly dizzy. My legs are bent, lying on the canvas like an extension of myself that twists sporadically, while my arms rest at my sides, motionless, and my tearful gaze is fixed on the arena lights. I'm still in the match, I tell myself. But all I can think about is that entire crowd watching me right now, exactly as I am. A lonely, insecure, and fragile little girl. My stomach glistens with sweat, rising and falling with labored breaths, while my hair sticks to my face, the sweat mixing with the tears, and my mind slowly regains consciousness and the functioning of my senses

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am laying so dizzy on the floor with my legs spread apart and my hand touching my head to see if there is any blood pouring .. not much of a goddess am I .. I had different plans for this match thinking it would be much easier because I was very well prepared unlike you .. but you fought back against everything I threw at you both physically and psychologically .. you earned my respect but I will never tell you that .. I roll to the side of the ring and use the ropes to support me as I try to get up to my feet .. then I suddenly feel dizzy again so I let myself slouch into the corner with my arms on the top ropes supporting me till I shake off that terrible feeling in my head

Sara_León: There is no room for optimism in my mind. I feel physically and mentally shattered. With all my strength, I want to surrender to you, like an atoning offering. I feel an overwhelming urge to crawl toward the ropes and leave the ring, but a part of me knows you won't let me. You've come to make an example out of me, and you won't let me leave until you've drained every last ounce of strength from me. At last I manage to roll over onto my stomach, still coughing from time to time, but becoming more and more lucid. I get onto all fours, lowering my head until my forehead rests on the canvas, lying prostrate in your direction in an involuntary yet meaningful metaphor

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am feeling a little better and my vision is more clear .. I am seeing you struggle to get to your feet but then comes a fascinating moment .. you are resting your forehead on the canvass in my direction as if your were surrendering or even worshipping me .. I don't know why but that boosts my confidence and gives me an adrenaline rush making it easier for me to get out of that corner .. I circle you like a predator does an injured prey but you are still dangerous .. last time I rushed in, I nearly lost everything after you countered with that German suplex .. I try to blind side till I am standing nearly to your side away from your reach .. and then when the right moment comes, I raise my leg up high in the air holding it with my hands, then release an axe kick aiming at your back .. knowing it too a lot of damage in this epic match

Sara_León: As soon as I lift my forehead off the canvas and raise my gaze, you're no longer in the corner. From my point of view, everything you do is bewildering. You appear and disappear at will. My eyes fill with despair, and I don't even have time to turn my head when I feel your leg CRUSH into my back perpendicularly. "AAAGGHHHHHH!" You reignite all the pain in the back of my torso as I collapse face-first onto the canvas, writhing like an animal and trying to drag myself across the canvas with my forearms

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: My heel impact perfectly at your lower back and you scream out in pain trying to crawl to the ropes .. but I smell blood in the water and that gives me a big drive to press my advantage till I finish the job .. The world may see me now as a mystical presence, but in reality I have worked hard and for long to be able to come here and challenge Sara .. and I will make the most of this moment and send a message to the entire NEW universe that a new force has arrived .. I grab your ankles and pull you to the center of the ring .. I then grab each ankle and try to tuck them under my armpits while I am moving forwards while still tucking your ankles making your legs and back arch .. then I kneel a little and try to grab your neck pulling back elevating you off the floor .. trying to lock in a hanging scorpion submission.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: Suddenly, I find myself being dragged backward... "No... NO!! LET GO OF ME!!" I scream, uselessly scratching at the canvas as you begin tucking my ankles under your armpits. My legs are bent backward, and my aching back once again feels the pressure. "Ahhh..." I begin to moan, trying to break free, but then I feel your soft yet firm hands grab my neck and begin pulling upward. "Ahhhgghggghhhh!!" My throat is crushed once again as I watch in panic as my head and chest leave the canvas, leaving me suspended in a hanging scorpion submission. I'm no longer crying, but my face is still a complete mess, with the tear tracks clearly visible, and now it's on full display for everyone to see as my body forms an unnatural O at the expense of my spine, while I never stop screaming. "AHHHHHHHHHH!! NNNNAAAAAAAAWWWWW!! LET GO OF ME!!!!"

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am able to lock in the hold with precision as you painfully hang in the air with your foot is nearly touching the back of your head .. I am panting and so exhausted after this grueling battle, but I feel a second wind as the promise to end the match drives me .. I pull your head back harder "you were never good enough Sara .. you just backstabbed your way to the top" saying this to break you mentally while literally breaking you physically ... my hand is also against your neck crushing your throat adding another layer to this excruciating hold

Sara_León: That statement manages to snap me out of my confusion a little. I open my eyes, knowing I've heard it before, that it's been used against me before... And that it's a lie I've already overcome. "THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!" I roar through a heart-wrenching groan, loud enough for even the fans to hear me. It feels as though my spine is about to snap, my legs folding as I feel them getting closer and closer to my head. The skin of my throat and my abdomen threatening to tear apart, but the mere possibility of surrendering to such a lie keeps my feeble will afloat. "THAT'S NOT TRUE!!! IT'S NOT... TRUE!!" I keep screaming between groans of agony, my eyes once again filling with tears that refuse to fall, but this time from sheer pain. My hands latch onto your wrists, pushing against them with trembling fingers and trying to relieve the pressure on my throat. The screams make me choke, pushing my entire body to its limit and forcing me to end with a long, desperate cry for help. "STOOOOOOOP!!!"

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: You are stubborn as hell particularly after I triggered you with what I said .. that wasn't probably the best thing to say at the moment .. mostly because I know it's not even true .. you are an incredible wrestler and you have the heart of the champion as you just proved today .. carrying you for long is starting to strain my arms , my theatrics might make me seem bigger but you are in fact a little bigger than I am .. but I dig deep and clinch my fingers tight around your throat ... First I say in a low ominous cold voice that only you and the ref will hear "you deserve to be lonely" then I release a scream that echoes in the arena pulling your head back viciously with every ounce of determination I have left.

Sara_León: My screams become so deafening that, if it weren't for the fact that everyone knows I have the option to submit, many people would be climbing into the ring to stop you. The pain is agonizing, my legs begin to go numb, and my breathing grows more and more labored. My entire body glistens with sweat, my hands tremble, and you whisper to me again. Hana's reconciliation is still far too fresh in my mind, and despite my situation, I'm not going to let you use that against me. "NO!!!" I roar, almost crying. "THAT'S NOT TRUE!! IT'S NOT— AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" You cut off my cry with one of your own, your scream blending with a fresh one from me as I feel that final brutal yank of my head, pushing me to my absolute physical and mental limit. "NONOONONONONONO!!! AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Tears stream from my face as I claw at the skin of your forearms and hands with my own in one last act of defiance, trying to force my fingers between yours with the last strength I have left while I feel the pain take hold of me and begin to crush me

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: you scream so loud and in agony that I could see the concern in the faces of the audience .. but you still don't submit or pass out .. This actually sows doubt inside me .. what else should I do to to defeat you or force you to submit .. I even lose my calm and tone which was part of my aura and start resorting to silly trash talking that I know it won't affect you .. I could barely hold your for any longer and the moment you push your fingers between mine, you break my grip and I drop you to the floor .. I retreat a little with my arms hurting and my soul filled with doubt "Come on Erin focus !! this is what we planned" I tell myself in an internal monologue .. I have to clear my head so suddenly in the middle of the ring while you are still recovering, I strike a meditation pose with my legs crossed under me and my hands against each other then close my eyes and start humming.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: As soon as I hit the mat, I remain completely motionless, while I feel the muscles in my legs, neck, and back slowly begin to realign. Any movement could be excruciatingly painful, so I lie there on the mat, breathing with difficulty, my body drenched in sweat and with barely any strength left... but with my mind boiling with determination. You tried to insult me; you tried to demoralize me with lies. I use every second you give me to recover, slowly testing my mobility, first in my arms, then in my legs, with small, erratic movements. I spit some saliva onto the mat, feeling my lips dry out and blinking repeatedly, little by little finding the will to keep going

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am totally detached from everything .. closing my eyes and meditating in the middle of the ring .. trying to regain my composure and conjure the spirits of my ancestors .. my humming gets louder singing an an ancient Egyptian hymen for goddess Isis which always brought me strength and made me feel invincible .. casting away any doubts that your resistance have sowed inside me and recapturing my true essence ..

Sara_León: I slightly raise my gaze, not quite understanding what you're doing, but it stirs that fear inside me. You almost made me submit, and I'm completely wrecked physically because of you. My thoughts are all over the place in my exhausted mind as I crawl across the canvas until I'm behind you, beginning to get up onto my knees. Seconds pass, and you still don't move, your hypnotic song making the crowd fall silent to listen to you, as if this were a real ritual. My eyes show frustration and desperation as I move closer to you from behind. "It's time to end this..." I mutter before beginning to wrap my arms around your neck in another attempt to lock you in a Rear Naked Choke. "You have my respect, but I need you to submit," I tell you flatly as I try to fully sink in the choke

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I am still meditating totally shut out from the rest of the world .. I feel I am no longer in the ring with you but transcended to anther place .. feeling so calm and peaceful .. when suddenly I start to feel your arms wrapping around my neck .. at the first I don't react at all keeping my eyes closed and still humming .. but then as your pressure on my neck builds up.. I stop humming and open my eyes .. yet still with very calm expressions without any panic or fear

Sara_León: I tighten my arms around your throat, beginning to apply pressure as I reposition my legs, sliding them over your ribs, and the crowd erupts once again. I press my chest against your back and pant directly behind your ear as I try to lock the hold in completely. A faint smile escapes me when I hear you stop humming, as if I'd managed to break a spell. "Can't breathe?" I ask between breaths, trying to fall backward and take you with me so I can fully secure the choke

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: Your grip is getting tighter but I remain calm .. yes my face is getting a little tense but I try to regulate my breathing .. when you start to trash talk to my ears, that stirs me up a bit and I feel myself getting angry but then take another deep breath to calm myself down .. when you try to fall backwards to secure the choke , I use my hand to try to prevent that.. then I try to plant my foot on the canvass and push down to try to get up

Sara_León: "Just give up already!" I shout into your ear in desperation as I see you manage to keep your balance. My entire body is clinging to your back, but my strength is obviously very limited, and I don't know how much longer I can hold on like this. My skin rubs against yours as I try to maintain as much pressure as I can, feeling you begin to rise to your feet. My arms start slipping against each other from the sweat, making it harder to keep my grip, and they begin to tremble visibly. "It's over!! Stop fighting!!" I tell you once more, putting all my hopes into this choke. Your calmness and lack of reaction begin to play another cruel trick on my mind. My direct contact with you, the physical restraint I'm subjecting you to, starts to feel illicit. But I don't dare let go... Not yet...

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: yes it's getting harder to breathe but I try to keep my focus and not panic .. I am not showing any reactions except for gritting my teeth while I plant one foot on the canvass .. I am half the way up with one foot and the other knee on the canvass .. you are still clinging to me like your life depended on it .. but I feel the sweat is making it harder for you to keep the grip .. I try to push one hand between your arm and my neck then suddenly push .. at the same time I try to reach back to grab your hair by the other hand .. if I manage to grab it, I will pull you using your hair while leaning forward trying to flip you over

Sara_León: You manage to get to your feet, and I turn my head, looking toward the corner, ready to throw myself backward if you charge into it. But that brief distraction costs me dearly when I feel your hand in my hair and your arm pushing mine away, making me lose my grip. "No... Ah! What?! WOAH!!" Everything happens very quickly. Your center of gravity shifts forward, and the pull on my hair makes me slide over your shoulders, flipping through the air before landing hard on my back on the canvas, a fresh expression of pain crossing my face. But I plant my hands on the canvas and pivot on my hips as fast as I can. As if my legs were the hands of a clock, I try to sweep the entire canvas in a circle around me, hoping to catch your ankles with my feet and bring you down

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I finally flip you over and I can breathe well again .. yes I was trying to be calm but your grip on my neck was starting to get tight till I broke it just in time .. I stay in the same position watching you land on your back .. I stand up on both my feet and start to move towards you but then in impressive agility, you spin and sweep my feet of the canvass .. I fly off the canvass and land on my back with a thud release a muffled "aghhhhh" laying there with my legs spread apart trying to recover quickly

Sara_León: Seeing you fall, I bite my lip hard enough to draw a little blood. I crawl toward you with my heart pounding, knowing I have to take advantage of the situation. I crouch down as I grab one of your wrists and violently yank your arm upward, draping it over my neck and lifting you slightly off the canvas. I extend my other arm toward your thighs as I try to stand, leaning to one side and attempting to leave you lying across my shoulders in a fireman's carry position, while letting out a heart-wrenching scream of pain

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I lay stunned on the canvass .. nothing really hurts that much but I was stunned by how quick you moved and sweeped my feet .. I am also still catching my breath after escaping your RNC .. before I can get a grip on the situation, you crouch besides me as I can see you angry determined yet still beautiful face , you yank my arm and hoist me up in the air on your shoulders in fireman's carry .. how can you even carry me after all the damage to your back .. I try to wiggle in your grip to destabilize it as I you release a scream that unsettles me a little .. I can see the faces of the crowd cheering you on and you drawing power from their support

Sara_León:

Sara_León: I can't hold you in that position for even two seconds. I never intended to. My legs are trembling from the effort, and my whole body wants to collapse, so that's exactly what I do. I throw my legs forward while you're still squirming on my shoulders, prolonging the scream I let out as I hoisted you up, and I fall backward, trying to crush you onto your back against the canvas beneath my own back with a Samoan Drop!!

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: When I wiggle over your shoulders I feel you losing your footing already and prepare myself to land on my feet .. but then you just fall back crushing me on the canvass under your own weight.. my back makes a hard landing and I want to release a scream because the pain is so much but I restraint myself only releasing a low pitched moan "AGHHH" .. I feel the impact rippling through my entire body, just laying there stunned and motionless .. I can still feel my legs but can't seem to move them just yet

Sara_León: My head drops onto your toned stomach, like the perfect pillow rising and falling with each breath. I stay there sprawled across you, my torso arched by the position, my arms stretched out to either side, one toward your legs and the other toward your shoulders. The referee takes a moment to react, but she quickly realizes what's happened and throws herself down to the canvas. "ONE!!..." I close my eyes in relief, resting on top of you, knowing I gave everything I had to take you down one more time. My chest and stomach heave violently with ragged gasps, knowing I don't even have the strength left to apply a dominant pin. Just being on top of you is enough. "TWO!!...."

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: when the referee counts one .. I am still stunned and can't seem to get myself to move .. I panic for a moment .. a millisecond .. it this how this is going to end .. a defeat in my first match despite controlling most of the match .. but then I close my eyes and take a deep breath and exhale like I am doing a really brief meditation trying to shut out the pain shooting in my back .. when the referee counts to two something erupts inside me .. I open my eyes and push you off me before the ref counts to three .. when I get you off me, I take another deep breath and raise my legs up then release them forcefully planting them to the canvass and getting up without using my hands in an impressive kip-up!!

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MXrh34vIlpA

Sara_León: "NOOOOOO!!!" I roar in a broken voice as you shove me forward, leaving me hunched on my knees. I slam my fist into the canvas and look up again, only to see you perform an incredible kip-up and get back to your feet... As if you were a mummy that had just come back to life. My entire body is visibly trembling. I choke on my own saliva as I stare at you standing in front of me. You seem so much taller now (enormously taller) like a towering statue casting its shadow over me. Your slender figure, drenched in sweat as though bathed in gold, overwhelms me with its mere presence. Panic takes hold of me. "No... It can't be... That's impossible..." I mutter as I awkwardly begin backing away, turning around and struggling to my feet, my legs shaking like jelly, until I lean against the ropes and cling to them. My survival instinct kicks in. You can't be invincible. You must have used up everything you had just to do that. So I hurl myself at you with another desperate scream, extending my arm at the last second as I try to take you down once more with a clothesline.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I can see the look of terror in your face as I kip up despite just moments after that devastating Samoan drop.. of course I still feel the pain in my back.. a sharp agonizing pain .. I just trained myself over the years to control that pain and turn into my favor.. the crowd goes wild and I can feel them for the first time cheering for me .. at least a section of them .. I look at you with intensity as you cling to the ropes and I say in a very calm voice "that's enough Sara .. I can see your soul screaming to you to just give up .. let me put you to rest .. I promise .. it will be peaceful".. but your stubborn side takes over and you charge at me attempting a clothesline .. I let myself fall back avoiding your extending arm till my hands touch the canvass with my back arching in a matrix evasion move .. then I push against the canvass and stand up again with agility and make it look effortless.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: You vanish from my sight like a ghost. My arm slices through empty air, and I stumble forward, barely managing to stop myself before reaching the ropes, then suddenly spin around. My hair flies out to the sides as I watch you rise back to your feet as if you were made of plastic, and your words begin to sink into my mind. I do want to give up. I can't go on. I'm exhausted. Your voice is so hypnotic... I truly feel as though you can see my soul. My desperate expression leaves you with no doubt that I do want you to grant me that rest, that I want to collapse into your arms and let this all be over. But the lioness that lives in my heart drives me forward once more. I throw myself at you, not aiming for any particular move, just trying to knock you down with my shoulder, my hip, my own momentum. To slam my entire body into you and put you back on the canvas. My legs and arms feel heavy; my whole body screams in pain, exhaustion, dehydration, and lack of air. I don't even know how I'm still standing... if only I could just once again...

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I evade you with ease then spin back looking at you .. I don't say anything but let my eyes pierce into your soul .. I can see every expression on your face wanting to give up .. your body is drenched in sweat and trembling in fear.. but then you defy every fiber in your being and just charge at me .. once you halfway to me, I bend forward at the waist will my hands are planted on the canvass while rapidly flicking my right leg backward. My knee bends at a sharp angle, driving my heel upward in an arc and aiming towards your face as you are charging towards me trying to execute a scorpion kick.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: "THHUUCKKK!!" Your boot crashes brutally into my face before I even realize you're upside down. My head snaps violently backward, my hair flying around me as my legs come to an abrupt stop and my back arches. The impact forces a spray of saliva from my mouth, mixed with blood. My chin lifts, and I end up staring at the ceiling, feeling as though my head is about to explode. An overwhelming wave of pain mixes with a crushing dizziness, leaving me staggering in place for what feels like three full seconds. I don't quite collapse onto the canvas... but I'm very clearly on the verge of doing so

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I feel the impact of my heel on your face as I adjust myself and stand up again facing you .. you are barely standing looking up to the lights with wandering eyes .. I move close to you and hold your face gently.. I bring my lips close to yours and breathing on you then close to your ears whispering "now it's time to rest Sara .. you earned it".. then suddenly I grab your hair tightly and jump raising my knees letting myself fall to my butt while driving your face and smashing it on my knees attempting the code breaker.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: I feel your touch, your soft hands settling against my cheeks, keeping me from collapsing completely. Your beautiful face so close to mine, your lips and your breath overwhelming me as you whisper with that same accent you've used to break me mentally so many times in such a short time. Your words crush my soul, yet at the same time they fill me with relief. The recent blow leaves me unable to think clearly. My unfocused gaze reflects nothing but helplessness when, all of a sudden, I feel your hands slide up to grab me by the hair, followed by a brutal yank downward. I don't know what's happening. My entire body whips forward at a ninety-degree angle in an instant, and— "BRRRWWWMM!!" My face SMASHES into your knees in a spectacular Codebreaker. My entire body jolts violently. My torso rebounds, and I spring upright in one quick motion, remaining on my feet for a brief moment with my eyes completely vacant. I sway in place before beginning to collapse backward, helplessly crashing onto the canvas. My arms fall outstretched at my sides, the back of my head bouncing off the mat as I end up lying completely motionless on my back, as though you'd shot me. My skin glistens with sweat, my mouth hangs slightly open, and my eyes remain almost closed. Only the frantic rise and fall of my chest and stomach shows that I'm still alive

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I land on by butt once I execute a perfect codebreaker smashing your face .. my back still hurts but the adrenaline makes me forget about .. the rush of knowing that I finally have you under my control permanently .. I get to my feet and look at you as you lay motionless on the canvass spread like an eagle .. the glistening of your sweat under the lights show the details of your muscles .. I think I could pin you right now but I still have one more move .. one more statement to make .. I kneel down and grab your hair then try to get you up till you are on your feet again but barely.. you are too dazed and only my grip on your hair and my hand supporting you stops you from falling again .. I want to wake you up just a little bit so you can be aware of my final statement .. and I also have been yearning to do that for a while during the match after seeing how valiantly you fought back and how good you looked doing that .. I put my hand on your cheek and wait till you open your eyes a little .. then I kiss you passionately on the lips for few seconds .. maybe I am still playing mind games with you but a part of me definitely wants to do this.

Sara_León: "Ppphhhh...." I let out a weak sigh as I feel your grip on my hair. You start pulling, and I don't react until you actually hurt me, forcing me to follow your movements. Every muscle protests at the slightest effort, and what is only a few seconds for you feels like hell to me. I press the palms of my hands against your thighs to support myself as you keep cruelly pulling my hair, forcing me to stand. My legs tremble like jelly, but you manage to keep me from collapsing. Then I feel the warm touch of your hand on my cheek again. My eyes open at once, but only slowly and weakly, seeing nothing more than a blur of your beautiful face. I swallow hard as I look upon the face of my destruction, that force of nature whose power I dared to challenge. Then you bring your face closer to mine... and my world comes to a standstill. Your enchanted lips press against mine, and you begin kissing me with a passion that is utterly bewildering to me. You send me to a paradise of pleasure and pain. My skin breaks out in goosebumps, my eyes close, my mind grows numb, and my entire body surrenders completely to you, granting you my last ounce of will as you take final control over my very being

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I kiss you for a few seconds enjoying the softness of your lips with our bodies touching against each other .. I can feel you getting lost in the kiss with your body trembling and letting out brief muffled moans .. I stop kissing you but keep my hand on your face looking to your eyes .. I am first smiling and biting my lip then suddenly my expression turns into cold blooded ruthlessness .. I grab your arm and twist behind your back like a hammerlock then bend a little grabbing the back of your knee .. I take a deep breath and lift you up using your twisted arm and leg till you are at the level of my torso then twist your leg forcing you to wrap both your legs around my waist ... I wrap my other arm around the back of your neck like a guillotine choke with the other hand still grabbing your twisted arm behind your back.. all that sequence happens in a second then I walk around the ring carrying you in an expression of total dominance as I am showing you off to the crowd who are gasping in disbelief till we are at the center of the ring.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: The kiss finally ends, and I gasp as you pull your lips away from mine, as though I've just awakened from a very deep dream. Even so, my head is still badly dazed, and I barely register the change in your expression. I feel my arm being twisted behind my back, your strength forcing my wrist against my spine and making me let out a moan. Then you bend my leg and LIFT my entire body upward. My free leg instinctively wraps around your waist, leaving me straddling your hips, and then your free arm finally traps my head, pressing my cheek against your side and making it hard for me to breathe. My free arm hangs limply over your shoulder as you walk around the ring, displaying your power over me while I remain almost completely immobilized, panting beneath your arm and still confused by your kiss. Beads of sweat drip from the tip of my nose as you reach the center of the ring and keep me there. Every inch of my body aches, trembling and visibly quivering, proof that I gave everything I had... and that it still wasn't enough to defeat the Egyptian goddess

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: While I am wrapping you up and carrying you, the time seems to stand still for a moment .. I can see the gazes of the crowd at awe of what they are watching .. I smile saying "may your soul finally have some peace" .. then I plant my feet to the canvass and push against jumping high up then bring my legs towards me while spread them .. driving our combined weights with the height of the jump and sudden deceleration on your lower spine which was already battered through the match, executing a perfect Voodoo drop.

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: Your words are a cruel comfort to my overwhelmed mind. I feel the heat rise to my cheeks and my eyes, which begin to well up, until... "AAAHHHHHHH!!!" I let out one final scream of panic as I feel the weightlessness of the jump, a second of freefall, and—BOOOOOOM!!—the small of my back is crushed hard against the canvas. Completely trapped in your hold, the full force of the impact reverberates through my entire body. A shockwave of pain surges up my spine from bottom to top with such intensity that I feel my consciousness slipping away. My vision fades completely to black as you release the wrist pinned behind my back, and my entire body goes limp, collapsing backward. My back hits the canvas, my arms fall outstretched behind my head, my eyes close, and I lie there with my legs draped over your hips, completely knocked out

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: The impact was too much for you to bear as your body collapses backwards and goes limp .. your legs are still at the side of my hip so I just extend my legs and pin your shoulders using my calves while smiling .. that smile carries the satisfaction of knowing I just defeated the champ emphatically and relief that I survived the hellish fight you put up against me.. the referee starts counting ONE .... I don't think there is any doubt at the moment even if the ref has to count to ten as you like motionless under me .. TWO !

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Sara_León: I am completely out cold, my breathing automatic but still labored. I have the marks of your boot on my throat, a few bruises on my body, and a cut on my lip. A little blood trickles between my lips from your superkick and your scorpion kick. I'm drenched in sweat, having given every last drop and still failed, while the referee counts and I'm not even aware of it. "THREE!! RING THE BELL!!!" The crowd leaps to its feet, roaring and cheering for you. Your oriental entrance music begins to play as I remain lying on the canvas, defeated

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: The bell rings and the crowd erupts in a huge pop as I pin you for few more seconds with the same look of satisfaction on my face.. then I gently push your legs off me , as if I am careful not to hurt you anymore.. I stand on my feet and walk a around the ring taking in the cheers of the crowd as my oriental music echoes through the arena.. but public' adulation is not why I came here.. I signal that I want a mic and someone throws me one .. I stand in the center of the ring with a spotlight on me while the rest of the arena goes dim.. I say in a calm voice with an oriental accent "My message has been delivered to every soul in NEW universe.. a new age has come and the reign of the Egyptian goddess has just begun.. you can run but you can never hide from my gaze".. then I move towards you while you are still motionless on the canvass placing one foot on each side of you and sitting on your chest "as for you Sara .. my chosen one" I say that while my hand gently caresses your sweaty face pushing your hair to the side .. then my fingers move down your neck till my hands rest on the center of your chest on your heart .. waiting for you to regain a little consciousness back to hear my words.

Sara_León: The lights go out, and the ring is illuminated by a single large spotlight, as though it were a stage prepared just for you. The sudden burst of light makes me involuntarily furrow my brow as I hear your voice echoing throughout the arena, still distant and muffled, unable to even make out what you're saying. Then I feel your weight on my chest. My body twists slightly, finding it a little harder to breathe as your hand gently caresses my face, brushing the strands of hair stuck to it aside and revealing my exhausted, sweat-covered features. Slowly, I open my eyes, feeling the blinding spotlight shining down on me and gradually making out your silhouette. Your fingers trail down my neck, sending a shiver through me, until I feel your hand resting directly over my heart, which is pounding hard but slowly beginning to calm. I look up at you through half-open eyes, helplessness and fear, respect and defeat all written across my face

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I look down into your eyes while sitting on your chest , feeling your heart going fast but calming down when I stare into your eyes "I have chosen you not because you are the champion .. I did because I have always known there is a deeper layer to you .. like a jewel waiting to be unearthed.. I have looked into your soul while we were at war.. I have sensed every doubt you have about yourself.. about your worth .. I even spoke some words to provoke those feeling inside you and bring them to the surface .. that little voice inside you always telling you that it's time to give up.. that you don't need to fight anymore" .. then before I continue, I start getting off your chest and standing up with one hand holding the mic while the other gently around your face at the chin .. I get up slowly giving you enough time to get up on your own will .. as if I was enchanting you to move along with me.

Sara_León: As I feel my chest being dominantly pinned beneath you, it's my abdomen that bears the rhythmic motion of my breathing. Your hand resting on my chest makes me want to steady it, as though it had the power to do so, but my heart cannot lie to you. And when you begin to speak again... this time there is no inner struggle. There is no lioness urging me to keep fighting. There is no desire to prove anything. The truth has come to light, and at last I can rest in it. At last I can admit that your voice hypnotizes me, and at last I can surrender myself to it. And then your words sink deeper than ever before. I know you can see into my soul; I have no doubts left. It feels as though, throughout the entire match, you were only playing with me, putting me to the test. You speak about that voice in my head as though you've always known it, even though I've never told anyone about it. Then you begin to rise, guiding me with your hand beneath my chin. And I follow you with complete docility, though with effort and pain. The crowd murmurs as they watch you bring me to my feet without forcing me, simply guiding me with quiet dominance, until I end up kneeling before you, my chin raised, my eyes fixed on your face, my body utterly exhausted

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior:

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I bring you to your knees in front of me without using any force .. like a charmer guiding a snake using only the music of my voice .. but instead of a snake it's a lioness albeit a tamed one.. my hand gently touches your face and your gaze is glued to me like nothing else matters in the world at the moment.. I continue my words saying "but despite those doubts eating at you .. despite that inner voice telling you to stop.. despite every bone and muscle in your body screaming to give up.. you continued fighting back with strength, determination and with a heart of true lioness.. I could sense the struggle in you but in every single time your will to fight overcame your demons .. not because you have to fight .. but because you chose to .. and even for someone like me.. that is .. astonishing" .. I then lean forwards a little bringing my face close to yours and my eyes open staring into your blue eyes.. feeling your breath on my face.

Sara_León: I feel your warm hand caressing my face. My feline nature takes on its gentlest form, allowing itself to be guided by your touch and your words. An extraordinary warmth fills my soul as you speak to me, as though I had gone through a trial by fire and, in some way, passed it. The defeat begins to taste less bitter on my lips, and even the faintest hint of a weary smile appears. And when you lean closer, those dark eyes pierce my soul once again, but this time they don't unsettle me, because I'm no longer afraid that you can read it. You have sailed through it, torn it down and rebuilt it at will, as though it belonged to you. And my gaze, my beautiful blue eyes, reflects that very feeling. My breathing is still labored, though much steadier now, and feeling your face so close to mine makes me uneasy once again, but the certainty that you can do whatever you want with me makes me hold my position. I don't answer you; I simply let my eyes, immeasurably grateful for your words, tell you how they feel

Erin_The_Egyptian_Warrior: I look into your beautiful blue eyes and I don't see that look of defiance that was once there .. instead it is replaced by a look of gratitude and reverence.. I guess my look at you also changed .. from that cold distant look to one filled with respect and admiration for your ability and above all your unwavering fighting spirit .. I had to throw everything at you to put you down and you even revealed my vulnerable human side at times.. those thoughts come to my mind as we lock eyes for a second that feels much longer as if the time stood still .. then I close my eyes and kiss your trembling lips while my hands touch the side of your face .. my lips pressing gently against yours as if I am blessing and anointing you one last time .. then the lights goes completely out as darkness fall on the arena with me vanishing .. my body may have left the arena for now.. but my presence and the consequences of what I did will ripple long after I'm gone.

Sara_León: Your eyes close, and you lean in until your lips claim my trembling, swollen, bloodied ones. My own eyes close as well, a muffled moan escaping into your kiss, but suddenly the lights go out. Your lips leave mine, and your hand slips away from my face, making me gasp. The crowd begins to murmur, preventing me from hearing anything you might be doing. I remain kneeling in the middle of the ring, confused, looking around without being able to make out anything except the glow of a few fans' phone screens. Nearly fifteen seconds pass before the lights come back on. I raise a hand in front of my eyes, dazzled by the sudden change in lighting, and then I begin to hear the crowd applauding. I look around, not understanding what's happening. You're nowhere to be seen. Then I lower my gaze and find the N.E.W. championship belt resting across my lap. I take it in both hands, looking at it with tenderness and silently thanking you for the gesture. You believe I am worthy after all. The applause of the crowd is enough to move me. Maybe I didn't win tonight, but without even realizing it, I did prove why I'm their champion. Your presence changed the course of this night. It stirred me, inside and out, and left a deep mark on my soul... and perhaps on the souls of the rest of Noir as well

Sara_León:

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Published: 8 days ago, viewed 40 times.

Comments

6

Mina Anderson

6 days ago

This epic is one of the best I have ever read on here. Thanks to two amazing fighter, writers and story tellers for sharing it us all. Helps that you are both super cute too, in a ferocious kind of way!

Loved the supernatural/psychological elements!


Sara León

6 days ago

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Coming from you, that's an absolutely incredible compliment to me, truly. I hope you enjoyed the references to your character and to our match!! ❤️


A real tour de force. I adore the writing here. Well done both x


Hana Jeong

7 days ago

Congratulations for both of you, this is exactly what Noir is. It's not only about beating up or making your opponent submit. It's also the psychological dominance and Erin is incredibly good on this like if she had "supernatural" mind powers.
Erin tamed Sara. Literally. Erin like if she managed to break through the wall of Sara's soul by the small gaps that represent the doubts, the fragilities that all women have no matter how strong they are, because in the end of the day we are all fragile beings. Congratulations, once more, I loved it.


Sara León

6 days ago

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She really did tame me, and it was an incredible experience. I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much, and that we were able to make this story fit into Noir. Thank you for your kind words ❤️


Chanyotaaa

7 days ago

Great fight girls!!!Amazing moves !